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I'm attempting to figure out what I was doing with the third story in the In The Open series I've been writing. I last worked on it back in September, and I left it with something clearly being set up, and now I can't remember what.
 
 
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endaewen
15 October 2007 @ 08:21 pm
Story three in the series is making some progress again. After nearly three months where I couldn't seem to get what I had in my head on paper, I added a couple hundred words to it today. One of the problems with the series is that I have to try and figure out why I did things in the earlier stories, such as the break-in. At the time I needed an excuse to keep the characters together. Now I'm trying to figure out who it was that was behind the break-in and developing surveillance.

Then I need to sort out what the characters should do about it.
 
 
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Current Music: Hey Mister Big - Trooper
 
 
endaewen
07 July 2007 @ 08:57 pm
Well, I've started writing the next story in the series. Unfortunately, it's going slower than I'd hoped. What I want to get is the reactions of the news media. What I'm afraid I'll get is exactly that, but as a take-off of the Tanya Huff
Blood
series. Not what I am looking for at all.
 
 
Current Music: Hughie The Graeme - Fyre And Sword
 
 
endaewen
30 June 2007 @ 01:39 pm
Title:
Perspectives: Joe: Discovery
Author:
Endaewen
Series:
Perspectives – Characters thoughts on the events of “In The Open”
Fandom:
Highlander
Rating:
G
Summary:
The discovery of immortals by the general public. A series of connected vignettes. Joe's thoughts and perspective on the chapter “Discovery”.
Disclaimer:
All characters and settings belong to Davis/Panzer.

It's been one heck of a day, and everything's changed, but yet it hasn't. The day-to-day minutae of life goes on unchanged. I know, that doesn't make sense, but I've got to put this down somehow for the Chronicles. This is going to be a day to remember. This was the day when the existence of Immortals was revealed to the general public. It is no longer a secret held only by the Immortals, and the Watchers. What the world will make of it has yet to be shown.

When I woke up to the phone ringing at four this morning, only two possibilities came to mind. Either that something had happened to Amy, my daughter, or that one of my Immortal friends had fallen to the Game. Thanks to my job involving following Duncan between Seacouver and Paris on an irregular basis, I don't have too many mortal friends, and most of them are Watchers. Most of them have backed away since the revelations of the treason trial and my friendship with my Immortal.

So, to find out that it was none of these things was a relief. Not that Methos made things much clearer with his demand that I put a Watcher on Mac's loft. Because it was Methos, the five thousand year old Immortal speaking, and not his Adam Pierson, researcher persona. Especially, as Mac was at Adam's apartment. So, why did he need someone to run surveillance on the dojo? At leas I still held the position of Area Supervisor, so it was something I had the authority to order.

The only explanation he gave at that time was to say
“Remember that conversation we had a couple of weeks ago?”
The only conversation I think he was referring to was one about the eventual revelation of Immortals.

With the surveillance team sent out, I was too awake to go back to sleep, even though I knew my performance at the bar that night was going to suffer, so I turned on the T.V. Not much was on the news, really, the biggest story was about a murder at a gas station. At the time, I didn't think twice about it.

I spent the next few hours dealing with the paperwork of my many jobs. Running the bar is a full time job on it's own. On top of that, I have to keep Duncan's chronicles up to date – which was a lot easier when he was more or less out of the Game before the last couple of years, and do my job as the area supervisor. All three occupations provide an ever growing amount of paperwork, of which there are not enough hours in the day to deal with.

Then, I half-heard the update to the case at around seven in the morning, something about a mysterious second victim and I immediately began to pay full attention to the T.V. Not that it did me any good. There was no more information. Still, the pieces started to come together in my head.

One: Methos, a friend of Duncan's requests surveillance on the loft. Duncan's at his apartment. Two: Duncan arrived before four in the morning. I did some mental calculations and the time was about right for him to have been at the gas station around the time of the murders. Three: the reference to that conversation. Four: a mysterious second victim, which wasn't reported at first.
MacLeod
must have been that victim. He certainly wasn't the murderer!

A second phone conversation with Adam confirmed it, and I got MacLeod's version of the events as well.

Nearly two hours later, the second shift of the surveillance team went out on duty. Soon after, the Watcher doing the first shift brought in his report, including the audio notes he'd made throughout the night. I looked them over quickly, then took them over to Adam's. Just that quick look though, was enough to make me grateful for two things: one, and most importantly, that Duncan hadn't gone home last night, and two, that Adam had told me to put the team on the building. Until that moment, I'd thought it was a wasted effort.

As we went through the report at Adam's, I was reminded again how Methos survived those five thousand years he's lived. He has a keen grasp of strategy, details and implications. That's also what made him such a good researcher for the Watchers. Well, that and the personal knowledge he's gained by living through the times. It also helped, of course that he was researching himself, and doing more to keep himself hidden than actually working to find his subject.

I got back in time to just as the phone stopped ringing, and to turn on the T.V. to the promised press conference.

Obviously, something new had come up, with the way the reporters were asking questions. It seemed as though they'd heard something the police representative wasn't prepared to admit to. From the sounds of their questions, someone had leaked an account of the security footage of Mac's recovery. Not the actual footage, but a description.

During the first half hour of the conference, the phone rang again. It was the Watcher hired by the police. She was phoning to let me know about the conference, and to say I should be watching if if I hadn't been already. She knew who it was from the description as well. Mac's pretty well known on sight and description among the Watchers. Especially after that time was in the Headquarters last year.

No sooner had I hung up on that call, and focussed back on the conference than the phone rang again. And that was the start of it. Almost every one of Mac's Immortal friends on the North American continent, along with Anne Lindsey, his former girlfriend started calling for confirmation of what was happening. The notable exception was Richie. I guess his was the call I missed as I got in the door. I didn't get to see much of the conference after all. I ended up answering questions, and redirecting some of the calls to Methos. Not all of them, only the ones who already had his number. I didn't think he'd appreciate something like twenty probable strangers getting his number.

Not all the calls the rest of the day were from Duncan's friends though. There were several calls from other Watchers wanting confirmation of what had happened as well.

The next months, or even years are going to be interesting as the world both reacts and adjusts to the presence of Immortals in their midst. I'm hoping things will go smoothly, but I know better than to expect it. Not after seeing the Watchers turned Hunters and the problems they caused. Hopefully, I can talk to Adam sometime in the next few days and see what his perspective is. He's lived through so much that he might be able to predict how people will react better than I can. And figure out what MacLeod can do now. Hiding won't be an easy option for him. Not with the way the story's been carried across the States. I'm sure that by tomorrow it will have spread through Europe and Asia.

He's also got so many enemies, or at least that's how it seems these days. Thanks to this, they'll all have a much easier time finding him, if they are interested in taking his head. I hope he keeps a low profile and a good watch out for them.
 
 
endaewen
30 June 2007 @ 09:44 am
Title:
Discovery
Author:
Endaewen
Series:
In The Open
Fandom:
Highlander
Rating:
PG
Summary:
The discovery of immortals by the general public. The second in a series of connected vignettes.
Disclaimer:
All characters and settings belong to Davis/Panzer.

Read  )
 
 
endaewen
29 June 2007 @ 10:43 pm
I've gotten "Discoveries" finished as well as "Perspectives One" tonight. Yikes! That's over two thousand words today.
 
 
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Current Music: Queen - Forever
 
 
endaewen
29 June 2007 @ 09:45 pm
I've broken a thousand words on the first of the Perspectives pieces. It's Joe's thoughts on the chapter "Discovery" (Not yet finished or posted). I've never tried writing two pieces at the same time, much less two parallel ones.

Now I'm wondering. Should I post the perspectives piece as part of the In The Open series, or should it be on it's own? I'm thinking there's going to be at least two more of them.
 
 
Current Music: Bonnie Portmore - Lorenna McKinnet
 
 
endaewen
29 June 2007 @ 05:05 pm
I've given this series it's own tag now. It's just sprouting every time I look at it.

There's the six main stories/chapters, of which the first, "Conversations" has been posted. The second one, "Discovery" is being writen, and it's longer than most of my stories at this point, at nearly 2400 words. Now, I have a set of other views, screaming to be added. I've got the first two paragraphs for one of those roughed out as well. I can see three of the 'perspectives' pieces at this time.
 
 
Current Music: Big River - Best of Highlander Soundtrack
 
 
endaewen
27 June 2007 @ 07:58 pm
I'm posting this, even though I'm having trouble writing the second piece. If you see any errors, or have problems with characterization, I'd really like to know. I will admit that it is my first Highlander fic.

Title:
Conversations
Author:
Endaewen
Series:
In The Open
Fandom:
Highlander
Rating:
G
Summary:
The discovery of immortals by the general public. A series of connected vignettes.
Disclaimer:
All characters and settings belong to Davis/Panzer.
Note:
This story was given a preliminary read by [info]ithildyn, for which I thank her greatly.

The story... )
 
 
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endaewen
25 June 2007 @ 09:16 pm
I'm working on that story I mentioned earlier today. I'm finding it tough going, because although I have the ideas, I can't get what I feel to be the character's voices right.

My DVD's are getting a work-out for sure. I've ended up watching episodes I had not yet seen, although for the moment, I'm skipping the flashbacks.

So far, for the first piece, I've watched parts of Take Back The Night, and Chivalry. Finale I and II are on my 'to watch' list for this as well.

Recs for episodes with Duncan, Methos and the others in serious conversation? Maybe if I watch more of it, I can write it.

Plotting it out, the story looks like it will be in six parts.

Part 4 and 6 are screaming to be written, but I need to finish the others first.

I'd also love it if someone would like to read parts as I finish them to help me improve.
 
 
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